Hypnagogic

Thou really suck.

For today’s daily create we were asked to make a short story using Shakespearean insults.

Most people rejected in favor of doing compliments instead, but honestly where’s the fun in that. Twitter has a really low character limit, but instead of just taking a screenshot of a story I made some very short flash fiction. It’s essentially two teenagers/collage kids fighting and name calling until their mother lifts that ban on cursing so they stop fighting. It was fun to work with in such tight bounds, the prompt said get as many in as you can, but I didn’t want it to become repetitive before the punchline.

1 thought on “Thou really suck.

  1. I liked the creativity behind the dialogue. I also found it to be a funny scene that I feel like would be in a short comedy sketch.

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